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Flinch comic- The Neighbor pg1

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This is for an West Australian comic publishing company in Perth, Gestalt Comics. They are holding a Character Sketch event called FLINCH. It's B/W and 4 pages allowed and its for new and upcoming artists to showcase their works to international public. More info is here: [link]

This is my story for Flinch. A story about a guy trying to get the new girl next door. But gets more than he bargains for....

I'm not really good with dialogues but I don't care abt it. As long as my the story makes sense.

My artworks are usually not clean lines like everyone elses since I like to show raw and messy lines so that it can have that feeling of genuine and original. And I borrow my influence and style from Ben Templesmith since I love his raw artworks and illustration.

Tools: Paint, Brushes, Pencils, Photoshop, Photography, Mouse and Intuos 3 Wacom Tablet.

Enjoy. I take all comments and critiques. Be truthful.
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You could work on the roundness of the face. Right now the eyes look like they're set on a wall or something, not to mention that right now the eyes look like paper cutouts. The eyeball is round, and the 'whites' of the eyes don't have to be all white all the way around. they shade just like spheres.
Also, there's just not as much face to the left of the eye as you show in the second panel.

Not trying to hate - just giving a critique. :)